This Sunday's snippet features Darlene from my short story, Laid To Rest. Richie (the narrator) and his sidekick, Tommy Ray Petty. are in the process of trying to steal gas out of the mayor's Cadillac while he is visiting the town prostitute, Darlene. (During sex with Darlene, the mayor has passed away). The two hapless rednecks are offered $5000 by the mayor's brother to make it appear he died in a respectable car wreck.
"Tell us what happened, Darlene," I said.
"I was just lying there thinking about that pretty pink sundress I saw down at Shainberg's while Mayor Stroud was moaning and making funny faces. Why, I thought he was just enjoying himself and the next thing I knew he went limp and I mean all over! And, then, his eyes rolled back in his head!" She flung her arm across her face. "I ain't never gonna be right again."
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25 comments:
Thanks for the laugh! :)
Bought the book!!
Can't wait to get into it!!
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Poor Darlene! Maybe she'll look for another line of work lol
Hilarious. Laying back thinking of the sundress! Such a great voice here!
lol oh that was great!
Great six! Sounds like a fun read.
Ha, the snippets from this book have all made me chuckle, and this one is no exception.
Too funny! I love visiting on Sunday for a good laugh. Great job.
Poor Darlene! Guess she was too good at her job. :-O
Oh my! I like your prose, it is so engaging and fun to read. The dialog really shows Darlene's character.
This continues to be such a fun story!
I so laughed at this...! Loading it up on my Kindle now!
Glad everyone is enjoying Darlene. LOL!
LOL. Poor Darlene.
LOL. This keeps getting better and better.
I loved Tommy Ray’s story when you first told me about it last year. I’d like to see you turn this idea into a book. And what a great movie it would make. Anyone reading these little snippets from the story is going to want to read more.
Interesting situation. I wonder how that turns out. o.0
ROFL
Oh lawd, that's AWESOME!!! LOL!
ROFLMAO! OMG! I'm dying!!! (BTW, I kept getting distracted by the cover for Almost an Outlaw. Love it.)
Poor Darlene. Great six : )
Great dialogue, and love the last line!
Great line!
Yikes and double yikes! Great dialogue, too.
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