Mayor Clifford Earl Stroud, the Third died the way no politician wants to die—on top of a woman who was not his wife.
Trouble was me and Tommy Ray Petty didn't know Mayor Stroud was having a heart attack while we were siphoning the gas out of his brand-new 1954 Caddy. The white Fleetwood gleamed in the moonlight like a beached whale as I removed the gas cap and threaded a piece of a rubber hose into the tank.
A match flickered in the darkness when Tommy Ray lit up a cigarette. Momma always said he wasn’t quite right.
"Tommy Ray, it ain't a good idea to smoke and steal gas at the same time."
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29 comments:
Great description of the era...can't say I feel sorry for the man- public humiliation at its finest
Wonderful! I love Southern fiction. Great six. (I want to read all of it.)
Great opener! No, Tom Petty ain't right? Say it ain't so. :)
I absolutely love the opening line! I want to read this!
~Sarah
Glad everyone has enjoyed Richie (the narrator) and Tommy Ray. Next week, I'll bring in Darlene, who is the "other woman".
nice descriptions..now I'm REALLy glad I picked up a copy of Almost and Outlaw :) WOOT
I love the first line.
This is great! Love the voice, love the lines, love the scene!
adore the opening line. Want more now!
Sounds like a great story. I'd like to read more
LOL the humor on this is so fun!
Oh no, I can see a huge explosion coming... Great snippet!
You KNOW I can't write!!Hahahaa....but I WANT this Book! Another good one!!!
Happy week friend!
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Fantastic! Looking forward to reading the rest! :)
THAT was AWESOME! Totally get a feel for your characters, and I definitely want to read more.
That is an awesome opening! Definitely makes me want to read more.
It brought the characters right out to me!
That is an EXCELLENT opening. Wow!
LOL! Great six!
I love 6 Sentence Sunday and thanks to everyone for the great response so far. I need to finish this story!
Love this! Great touches of humor and wonderful period details in this snippet. Love the hero/narrator's voice. (And yours.) Hope you'll post more.
Wonderful! The last line made me laugh out loud.
I love the last line.
I do like the idea of it though, but the beginning and the end seem like it's not quite unified.
I love this -- the narrator's voice is wonderful.
Great opening! Humor shines through from start to finish!
OMG! I LOVE this! Really great post. I'd totally keep reading. I hope you post more of this!
Hah! Love it. Very nice six Patricia.
Great opening line!
terrific opening
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