Today's post adds the mayor's brother, Albert, who is the bank president. Trouble is brewing for Richie, Tommy Ray and Darlene!
Albert Stroud gave us a hard look. I realized, right then and there, that you don’t mess around with him. "Let me assure you that if anyone does find out what happened here tonight, the three of you will regret the day you were born.”
Trying to dress a dead man in a hurry ain't easy. "We've got to get him in the Caddy before he stiffens up," I said as I buttoned the mayor's shirt.
"Richie, I don't want to regret the day I was born," Tommy Ray whined.
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33 comments:
This has become a bright spot every Sunday (thanks for this week's a bit early.) :)
Thanks, Reina. The post has to be up by Sunday morning so I usually go ahead and do it on Sat. night.
I just love this!Have you decided what you're doing with it? Are you writing it on the fly?
Oh, that was a nice post! "Dressing a dead guy ain't easy." lol
lol- Sounds like a really fun read.
I'm a total fan of this story. I hope you get it out there for us all to read!
Such a fun story premise, and great scene.
LOL. For some reason I already like Tommy Ray.
Oh, I love this. The humor is great, the characters well defined in just six!
I love these guys! They are just walking disasters and it is so very fun!
What unique and lovable characters! I'm curious to learn more about them.
Lisa: You are so right!! LOL!
Wonderful six. Love it!
Love this story. Love the characters. You have to finish this -- in either short story form or as a novella or even better yet as a novel.
I love these characters. I'd love to read this book.
I really enjoy visiting these characters every Sunday.
As soon as this book is out, I'm reading it. Love this!
I can just visualize all this with their confused faces :D
Git 'er done, Patricia! This is a great story.
Love this story, these characters. Can't wait to read the whole story.
LOL, I love these guys. Rednecks are good with cars and bodies and bodies in cars.
This is so much fun to read! I love the characters
LOL This is such an entertaining group of characters.
I love it, dressing a dead man in a hurry aint easy! hehe I adore your voice and character work :)
Love the set-up and the comic relief Tommy Ray provides. I'm sure dressing a dead man in a hurry is an acquired talent. (For who, I'm not sure.) :)
Had such a laugh with Darlene the other day :) This story sounds like a total hoot
You flesh out characters well. Great six.
Great six! Love the humor. I feel that Richie and Tommy Ray are in over their head and that their troubles will only snowball!
Great six. The story gets better and better each week
So glad everyone has gotten a laugh from this!
These characters are a gas. I am looking forward to reading more of them next week, and hopefully their whole story before too long.
Priceless! I love your humor, it comes through just right, not overdone, not forced. Just perfect!
Hehe, this sounds fab! :)
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