"Ain't what you're talking about called blackmail?" Darlene handed me her telephone.
"Would you rather be run out of town, Darlene?" I dialed the number and asked to speak to the mayor's brother.
Albert Stroud stood by the bed as I pulled back the sheet to let him see Mayor Stroud's body. Like a coroner, I stood there with the sheet in my hands and waited during the viewing, but I sure wasn't expecting the president of Stuttsville National Bank to slap the corpse.
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26 comments:
ooh great last line! I can just picture it!
Happy Mother's Day Friend!!
Hope you have a Wonderful Day!!
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TO slap the corpse? Awesome.
Your writing "tickles my fancy..." and makes me smile at the scenes you create. Great six!
lol, that last line was unexpected!
Great six!
Welcome back, Pat. So glad you're carrying on with these characters. Slapping the corpse! That's a new one.
(And PS: the little tyke in the pretty yellow bikini is adorable! Well done on that, too!)
Oh, I love that last line!
Great six :)
Yee! Now what'd he go and do that for? Thank you for bringing these characters back for another peek. I've been missing them. I just can't wait for this story to be out in purchasable form.
Appreciate all the comments!! Happy Mom's Day to all of you!
Very intriguing snippet!
Welcome back! Love this story. You are so awesomely good at creating crazy but believable characters.
WOW! Just hit the corpse! Loved it! Great 6!
Glad to have you back. Great six. The last line is priceless.
Great last line. So glad you've brought these crazy, wonderful characters back. Happy Mother's Day!
Slapping a corpse, hahaha...that's different.
Thats a 'dun dun daaaar' moment, if ever i read one! LOL great 6!
ROFL! That's fantastic!
LOl I love it. I can see the smack.
Very interesting...esp. that last line. Very unexpected--Great 6!
Love these characters and the voice. (I've been looking for them for weeks!) Glad you're back. Wonderful six (esp. #6!).
That was a great SSS. Definitely made me want to read more.
Wow, very intriquing
Slapping the corpse! LOL I love your work...fab six as always!
didn't see that coming
Oh, how I've missed these characters! Sorry for your loss, hope the sun shines for you in May.
Hey, Roberta! Thanks!
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