My god, she’s going to take it off. The sheer anticipation almost overwhelmed him. His gaze locked on her. In the past, he had lovers who disposed of their clothing in front of him, but never had that moment been as exciting as this one. It was like all his dreams were about to be exposed. He clenched the neck of the wine bottle as the hood fell from her head.
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19 comments:
I like this, sets the mood right away and makes you want to know what happens next! Really enjoyed the excerpt!
Thanks, Veronica!
Love his anticipation!
No fair leaving off there, lol. Great teaser.
Wonderful way to show his anticipation. His excitement i8s palpable.
Like the new header pic for the blog, too, btw.
Why do I think she's going to tease him to death and then leave the mask on? Because that's what I would do? LOL His anticipation is palpable. Loved this six.
Like the notion of his dreams being exposed. Very nice.
Great six! Love how his anticipation of seeing her face eclipses his anticipation of seeing other women's... ahem... parts. Really speaks to the emotion going on inside him! And, btw... LOVE New Orleans. One of my favorite places on the planet!
Clenched is a good word to show the tension! Great six!
Great six! Great anticipation and tension. I want to know what she looks like!
Take it off!
Ooh, great! I love his anticipation! Super six!
Love the first line. lol. And the idea that exposing her face excites him more than others dropping their clothes.
Great anticipation painted into your six! Well done.
I could feel the excitement in the air. Well done!
Best first line of a SSS ever! The rest of the snippet follows logically, and this short bit was a pleasure to read. I'm looking forward to getting to read all of this story. Hurry up and finish it! :)
An intense and exciting six!
You can't leave it like this! aaaahhh... I'll never get to see what she looks like. Well, maybe I will next week? ;)
I appreciate everyone's comments. I'm trying to get LS finished up this month. Hopefully by next week!
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