This is the introduction to the story I've just finished, "Laid to Rest." It has been in the making for a long time and some of you may remember Richie, Tommy Ray and Darlene from previous posts last year. The story stalled on me for a long time until it finally dawned on me to make it Darlene's story. Then, it flowed. Maybe because I just love Darlene and her attitude. The story will be part of my Down Home Humor series and published in June.
On a pleasant summer night in 1957, the womanizing mayor of Clayburn , Mississippi , Clifford Earl Stroud, the Third, died the way no married man wants to die.
This surprising calamity changed the lives of Darlene Higginbottom, who had dreams of Hollywood as well as Richie Underwood, an unemployed service station attendant with a talent for playing the fiddle. And Tommy Ray Petty, whose daddy had stared at Tommy the day he was born and said, "Damn, this boy looks stupid. Are you sure he’s mine?"
Now, in Darlene’s own words, here is the story of what really happened that fateful night when she took the mayor for a ride in more ways than one. . .
You can read other six sentence snippets here or check hashtag #sixsunday
Thanks for stopping by and your comments are appreciated! Happy Memorial Day!
Thanks for stopping by and your comments are appreciated! Happy Memorial Day!
21 comments:
An intriguing six! :)
I have an inkling of what kind of wild ride the mayor was on when he died. lol. Great snippet.
This sounds great -- I already love it, and can't wait to read more. :)
Funnily enuf, back in the days when I was a newspaper columnist and reporter, our beknighted mayor died in the saddle, so to speak. Not unlike a former vice prez/ governor of the great state of New York...
Great story. LOVE the voice!
I am ecstatic that you've finished "Laid to Rest!" That was one of the first posts I read last year when I found SSS and I've just been hoping it would come back. LOVE this story! Can't wait for its release!
I love the tone of this piece!
Intriguing set up, so many people I want to know more about, just in one quick six! Wow!
My oh my, what a lead-in! I LOVE this! I'm with Jenna: I'm glad you got yourself unstuck and managed to finish this. What a gem. Great six!!
I'm so glad you gals have stopped by and I appreciate your encouragement. That is the reason I didn't give up on this story even though I went around in circles for a long time with it.
Oh yes...this is Southern as sweet tea. You have a wonderful voice. :)
Oh my, what a setup! I have to read more of this!!
Can't wait to read this!
I love the voice and Darlene already sounds like a character I want to know more about. Lots of local color here and warm humor!
The end of the first line is superb! I'll definitely be back for more
Looks like a very cute story from the six you've shown. I'd keep reading!
Thanks, everyone! Glad you like the snippet. I love writing about these characters.
Oh wow. Where's the rest? I need to keep reading. LOL Great six
Hahaaa...that poor mayor...love the writing Pat...
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I love it! This little snippet has made me laugh, made me curious and raised an eyebrow! Fun writing:@)
Donna and Happier: Thanks for stopping by! You're gonna love Darlene!
I love Darlene and Richie and poor Tommy Ray!
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